When I looked out the
plane window I saw dark clouds and lightning, then it began to rain, it rained
and rained. Suddenly cross-winds came in. The plane was going everywhere. Then
a big bolt of lightning struck the plane. Inside the plane all the lights went
off. I could see light on the plane wing. Then I realized that the plane was on
fire. I heard someone say go to the back of the plane and get your parachutes.
I got mine and then I jumped out. Then I watched the plane go down in flames. I
was safe and sound.
By Blake
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