My eyes are shut closed, dreaming of moose’s
and maple trees.
I start to wake and my eyes start to water
as I look out the frosted window of the plane.
I become to see the shimming fresh
water lakes, the size of seas. The fir trees stood up high, curved around the
lake like a spoon.
I look in front of my seat and see a
flashing cherry red light, what was going to happen.
My head is bubbling, what is the
light. Then suddenly we start to fall, going down to the ground, I was shaking
not knowing what’s happening but then a bump, we landed just safely.
By Alyssa
Great build up of emotions towards the end, I like the descriptions of the scenery and while reading it I could easily picture the view from the window!
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