Monday, February 23, 2015
Maddison - When it all happened
It was a nice evening, I was sitting on my new leather chair my cat was perched at the other end all was fine and then…….. It happened…...A huge storm hit. I turned on my old radio that sat upon my oak tree coffee table. Over the old radio I heard that we were to stay inside until morning and when I thought it couldn't get any worse an EARTHQUAKE hit, My oak tree coffee table was trembling I jumped off the chair and ran outside it was not safe for me there. Years past and the leather chair still sit’s in an overgrown forest were my home stood.
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Hi Maddison :) I'm Govind! I really liked your story and the way you emphasised the word earthquake. Also I loved the idea that the chair was once in a house but the home was destroyed but the chair was still there.
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