Monday, February 23, 2015

Alyssa C- Ouch!

"Quick toucan!" Squaked kingfisher. "Wait!" "You may be fit for flying,swooping and diving but I am fit for sitting on a nest at home doing nothing!" "I wish I had a seat, I could seriously use".... KABOSH!!!! Toucan flew straight into a weird rock solid blob. "Be careful what you wish for toucan!" Spluttered kingfisher gasping and flinging himself around in the air. "If you landed on you tail feathers then maybe your wish could of come true!" Toucan stopped rubbing his beak wait a minute he thought. "What is this thing?" Then he took a look front on, it was a couch a rock solid, murky gray, hard, leather looking couch! Then they both looked up and screamed "CAT!!!!" And flew away, the cat stretched and walked away from the masterpiece as the clouds went cold.....

By Alyssa 
Posted by room5 at 7:10 PM

2 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 24, 2015 at 7:41 PM

    REALLY COOL!! You left me hanging!
    Kaitlyn

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  2. SarahFebruary 27, 2015 at 11:59 PM

    Hi Alyssa, this is an action-packed story, but it has too many words - 137!

    Part of the challenge of the 100WC is to write only one hundred words. I'm sure you could take out some of the words in your story without changing it too much. Why not have a go? :)

    Try again next week.
    Sarah Team 100WC
    Montpellier, France

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